It was quite humid there in the evening….
And he was tired with the extended travel. But he could only get some rest if he would reach the desired destination.
He was quite tall by appearance with some good looks to get a stare.. Even in the noon with some stubble around his cheeks , wearing a white shirt, black goggle and a tight blue colored denim, with a travel bag on his shoulder
He was waiting for some public Transport but what he could see is the limited availability of it over there.
Ah.. He don’t know anyone there and he can’t call anyone from the destination to pick up.
But he was waiting with a hope and faith on Almighty for more than an hour. And it actually proved worthy .
He saw an auto , with a beautiful lady in red saree in it, with some beautiful eyes ,sparkling like stars.. And decorated with some heavy gold ornaments near her neck ..
He sat next to her with a mere distance for decency. But they had their eye contacts which involved some spicy chemistry …
And then they went towards their respective destination in the common route,
In the next stoppage he has to arrange the sitting with 4 more ladies but no one was actually as beautiful as the first one.
And he was happily placed in between the group of ladies and a girl.
The road was quite bad in condition, as everyone was falling one over another and the guy was not happy with it as few were falling over him and he in result fell over the lady in red saree as she was in the corner. And she was looking with some angry eyes to feel bad.
But she also fell over him, which made her understand the scenario, it was very dark in the road with no lights at all ,and the auto was going at good speed with some jerks and brakes ,
Then he asked the driver about the time of reach to the destination and got reply of two more hour. He was like “Two more hours! ”
Then the lady in red saree whispered are you from outside?
He said yes , and I don’t know about the place , it is very dark and I don’t have a charged phone I have been traveling from yesterday and still not reached there.
She said I will guide you and then she spoke about her self and asked about him precisely,
and he was liking it, and she was also enjoying his company, she shared her travel reason, kids,husband’s job etc and by then he could understand that she is quite a nice woman.
Another brake came in between and he fell over her with touch over her forehand and she smiled and said the road is nice are you not liking it?
He said yes the best route of my life so far!
And again she whispered something fishy and he couldn’t listen and he asked her what I can’t hear you by inching next to her mouth !! as it was quite noisy there,
she smiled and said nothing in a whispered manner.
She asked him about the purpose of visit and he replied that ” for an interview “
she said you can’t work here as you are from outside you may not like the discomfort of here, he said I can if they pay good she smiled again,
She said you can come to my village as you said you don’t know the location and it is very dark and the area is more than dangerous for unknown person,
he said is it scary? And How I could come over there and where I would stay?
She said don’t worry , don’t think much you may join us I will share the problem to my husband he would not say no to your staying. I will manage it.
He was like thank you so much.
By then it was evident to everyone in the auto that something is nice in the conversation as they were listening about what they talk. And enjoying such tuning of unknowns.
Now, she thought to talk with the old lady next to him as she was quite known to her she asked about where she went and her purpose of travel.
And in between this she pressed his little finger of right leg in the darkness..with her left leg’s palm..
and he did the same in return , for some minutes.
she took her leg away.
And he put his head down to check whether he pressed the same leg.
She smiled on her own and purposely rubbed her shoulder with him , he liked her instincts and he didn’t removed his shoulder and touched her hand,
she also liked it and touched his hand and holded it tightly.
Her eyes were bigger now, and filled with notions ,she was happily enjoying his style of love scoops.. and She may have kissed him but she could not as there were many in the auto.
They both looked other side of each other with holding hands, for while.
And after sometime they started looking at each other with some extended eye contacts, and smiles over the faces, with some awkward touchdowns.
They spoke about their families and he came to know that her husband is very older than her and she is not living a happy life and so was seeking happiness in him.
And in between this his stoppage came and he has to go now with a lot of pain…
he smiled with helplessness…
she smiled with the folded lips and they said nothing to each other
Auto driver asked him some change she gave it on his behalf.. he said how could I Return it ? she said no need of doing it.
It was around 8.
Then the auto started and she moved forward and he winked his eyes with plenty of smile and sadness…
he turned again and again but he could not see anything as it was very dark there in the night…
So he walked towards the destination in that dark night.
***Not The End***
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Such a sweet story😍 and I remember how much U liked this girl back then 😉
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🙂 ?
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It was a good read, a light and simple story for something we might face daily and it was well described but a bit rushed I guess
I’m not a story expert so this opinion is personal only
Have a good day 🙂
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Well thank you so much for giving it a read and liking and also posting the honest feedback, well Even I am not an expert just attempted and outcome is in front of everyone,
Well I would be happy of you could elaborate a bit so that I could observe and rectify it.. Rushed as in..?
And yes I want the personal opinions only..
Wishing the same to you..
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This is a good attempt actually 👍
I meant by rushed that you could provide more details, focus more on some moments…that’s it
It’s my pleasure and wish you the best of luck 👍
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Okay got it.. Well I will try to out more details from the very next blog of mine.. Actually I always have a fear that people will scroll down and won’t read.. So a short one with emotions is OK if it has content.. But as u mentioned it now.so would love to write with more details and moments..
Thank you again.. Loved your feedback, wishing you the same.. Would love to know your views on other posts as well.
🙂
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Well whatever you write, you will not please everyone so you must write whatever you feel like I guess!
I will try to read as much as I can, and I can say the same about my posts but I never ask people to read, they are free 🙂
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Well you said it right..it is always me and my perception but inputs are good ..I find a positive vibe so I said that I will keep it mind.. There is nothing like pleasing. You are right we are here for our thoughts and we can satisfy everyone.. And we should not even try to.. But some are here to whom I treat as my friend so I take their view and observe it ..and do the necessary changes if needed..
I don’t find it shameful to ask my friends to read my blog or look at my work.. Though they are free as I don’t force..I just say and if they do it its good if not then also it is good.
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Each person has their own perspective and they act as they want, I just stated the way I think regarding my blog
Of course asking people you care about for their opinions is so normal and at the end it’s up to you to take their advise or not 👍
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Yes you said it right ..everyone is different with their outlook. And I am taking in that way only.. In the end it is up to the individual.. To take it or not. Yes I am completely agreed with your thoughts
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👍👍🙂
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I didn’t say you didn’t but I never saw your interactions, just the one you did on Gifs
And you’re free to read / comment / just like
My regular readers know already how I think from my various posts so when you read you’ll know that it’s not personal, I have my own rules that’s it
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So nice love story… really liked it ♥️
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Thank you… I am glad you liked.it…do share your views on the other blogs..as well.. Thanks a lot for the feedback..
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Welcome… okay I will check it ♥️
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You too have a good day 🤗
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As in colour, I don’t have any specific taste 😅😅
But, for ur post, I believe both have their own essence and I enjoyed both.
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It feels like I am on a cliff and this is a question of life and death 😂😂😂😂
Well, as for ur post, I think, I would go with red saree. Though, I would prefer black or blue anytime.
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Honestly, the grey one is also very nice and it’s not bothering.
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True, but, sometimes, it’s difficult to make choices..
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Not complex but little tricky…
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😂😂😂
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I am not able to recall this one. Anyway, u mentioned saree 😂😂😂😂
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I meant, my bad memory..
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😃😃
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😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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I was just kidding.. No need to be cautious. When I read “girl in red saree”, I remembered ur post “girl in grey saree”.. so..
Anyway, I liked the post. The story was quite intriguing. I was hoping for the more.
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I know that u were kidding… But even I was aware of such resemblance.. Happy that u enjoyed it and liked.. Well I would try to come with some better content..to match the demands..
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Me and saree, nah.. I am the best example to prove that not every girl looks pretty in saree… 😅😅😅😅
Moreover, I believe beauty lies in the eyes of beholder.
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Wow… Very rightly said beauty lies in d eyes….. But U should try as everything looks good if we start believing it…
Anyways it us ur call… #notobsessedtosaree…
#obsessedtobeautyandkindness
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Are you obsess with girls in saree? 😅😅😅😅
Just kidding..
A sweet and lovely tale..
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Haha. .thank you for d lovely comment… I thought that this may b asked to me…
I think I m obsessed to everything which is beautiful… Not just the saree girls… Beyond that also…
Hope u wear the saree and look pretty…as well
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Cool story
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Sure I would love to read them
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I might
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It is a sweet love story. Thanks for the follow.
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It was really sweet
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That’s Good to know …from you dear.. I am glad you liked… Would love to write more such sweet tales…
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Yes please do that
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Sure… I will ..I have few in the bucket list. Would pen down them in the leisure time… May sneak some time from the boring daily routine.. Thanks a lot for the encouragement..!!!!
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You’re welcome
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Yes
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Hehe
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